September 3, 2012 · 5:32 pm
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Raw

I like it when you’re raw

Authentic

When you speak your mind

Without filtering

Processing

Editing

I like it when you’re organic

No artificial preservatives

Unsprayed

True to your unaltered DNA

I like it when you’re real

Not a picture on a wrapping that promises one thing

But delivers another

I like it when you’re fresh

Never go stale

You’re so much easier to digest

 

 

David Trudel  © 2012

 

 

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3 responses to “Raw”

  1. Joan Miranda
    September 3, 2012 at 6:38 pm

    Wonderful writing hope everybody goes naked with their thoughts not afraid of what everyone will see for it is the real them, it is how they truly feel or think

    Reply
  2. Susan L Daniels
    September 3, 2012 at 6:52 pm

    Really enjoyed the multiple layers in this one.

    Reply

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