This thought is launched like a guided missile
Aimed at your heart
Its accuracy is precise
The effect devastating and immediate
Over a thousand miles away
You survive its strike but your complacency is shattered
Even as your own thoughts
Are sent on their retaliatory mission of
Mutually assured
Seduction
David Trudel © 2012
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Ooo–Fantastic poem!
Reblogged this on shafiqah1 and commented:
Uhm, “love is a battlefield?” Love the extended Metaphor in this piece! 😉
Thanks Susan and Shafiqah. No, this isn’t a battlefield metaphor at all, instead its a metaphor about the impact that we can have on each other so many miles apart.
so true.. I like the way you put it.
Thanks!
Quite effectively used.
Bang!